My knowledge of the whole Sentinel universe is really spotty, but you did a great job explaining it. I enjoyed seeing John through Rodney's eyes, the way their relationship progressed, and how Rodney's affection for John unfolded without him even realizing it. I liked Rodney's relationship with Carson, and it all seamlessly merged into canon (sort of) at the end.

Hands down my favorite line was the one were Rodney was sure they were all going to die because of feelings. Excellent writing :)